WALT use precise nouns.

This week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more specific for the reader.


We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.

Here is a example.

In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the shop diary to get some food. We also went to look for a present for my cousin’s birthday. I had to choose between a barbie,minion  doll and a soft toy . After that we went to the shop to buy some clothes, I got two new cloths items and a pair of  footwear shoes. Because I had been so good, mum took me to the shop to buy an  trumpet, cookie ice block ice block. Lucky me