We are learning to write an information report about a topic related to space.
By Friday 5 June you need to have written and edited your information report on a topic related to space so that it is ready to be published.
Here are some ideas to write about:
- Jupiter
- Astronauts
- Earth
- The Moon
- Eclipses
- Stars
My topic is:
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Jupiter
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You need to attend one workshop with the teacher on an area that you feel you need help with for your writing. Here is the time table where you will make your bookings. There is space for seven people in each workshop so book in quickly to make sure there is space!
Start researching and plan your writing here: (remember to write notes in your plan). Click here to see an exemplar of a plan.
Introduction:
jupiter has at least 62 moons
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Main idea:
Appearance
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More detail:
jupiter is white,orange,brown,red
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More detail:
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Main idea:
size
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More detail:
jupiter is the largest planet in our solar system
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More detail:
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Main idea:
live
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More detail: no water
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More detail:
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Level 3
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Student Targets:
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Yes!
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Audience and Purpose
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Content/Ideas
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Structure: including punctuation and grammar
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Editing
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Start your writing here:
Introduction
I am going to tell you all about Jupiter.Did you know Jupiter has at least 63 Moons.
Appearance
Jupiter is White,Orange,Red.It is so big that it is the largest planet in our Solar System.Jupiter has storm.Jupiter is a spherical ball in our Solar System is is so big.The diameter of Jupiter is approximately 143,000 km.
Size
Jupiter is 778 million km from the Sun and also Jupiter 69’911 km big.Jupiter is the largest planet in our Solar System.Jupiter has storms the great red spots on Jupiter is a giant storm that has been going for 350 year.
Live
Jupiter has no water and no food it is a gas giant like Saturn.Jupiter is the most massive planet in our Solar System and Jupiter has a kind mini
Jupiter has no water and no anything it only got it own planet and no food and The most massive planet in our solar system.
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