My Space Inquiry

MY POEM

About my information report about Jupiter

We are learning to write an information report about a topic related to space.

By Friday 5 June you need to have written and edited your information report on a topic related to space so that it is ready to be published.

Here are some ideas to write about:

• Jupiter
• Astronauts
• Earth    
• The Moon  
• Eclipses
• Stars

My topic is:

Jupiter

You need to attend one workshop with the teacher on an area that you feel you need help with for your writing. Here is the time       table where you will make your bookings. There is space for seven people in each workshop so book in quickly to make sure there is space!

Start researching and plan your writing here: (remember to write notes in your plan). Click here to see an exemplar of a plan.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          

Introduction: jupiter has at least 62 moons
Main idea: Appearance	More detail: jupiter is white,orange,brown,red	More detail:
Main idea: size	More detail: jupiter is the largest planet in our solar system	More detail:
Main idea: live	More detail: no water	More detail:

Success Criteria for writing. Click here to see an exemplar of an information report about Mars.

Level 3	Student Targets:		Yes!
Audience and Purpose	Identify my audience and purpose for writing.
Content/Ideas	Write clearly and include all important information.
	Add factual detail to expand my ideas.
Structure: including punctuation and grammar	Use different sentence starters.
	Join some ideas using conjunctions such as: when, while, after, since, until, if, because, although, that
	Organise my ideas into paragraphs and sequence my ideas so that my writing flows.
	Use subheadings for each new paragraph to tell the reader what it is about
	Check that I am writing in the present tense (for example: the sun is a ball of fire; the stars are shooting through the sky)
	Use a range of punctuation correctly.    (.,?!)
Editing	Identify and correct most spelling errors.
	Improve my writing so that it is more enjoyable/informative for the reader.

Start your writing here:

Introduction

I am going to tell you all about Jupiter.Did you know Jupiter has at least 63 Moons.

Appearance

Jupiter is White,Orange,Red.It is so  big that it is the largest planet in our Solar  System.Jupiter has storm.Jupiter is a spherical ball in our Solar System is is so big.The diameter of Jupiter is approximately 143,000 km.

Size

Jupiter is 778 million km from the Sun and also Jupiter 69’911 km big.Jupiter is the largest planet in our Solar System.Jupiter has storms the great red spots on Jupiter is a giant storm that has been going for 350 year.

Live

Jupiter has no water and no food it is a gas giant like Saturn.Jupiter is the most massive planet in our Solar System and Jupiter has a kind mini

Jupiter has no water and no anything it only got it own planet and no food and The most massive planet in our solar system.

About Saturn

Take a photo of your plan using an ipad.

Success Criteria

Clear categories with subtitles	Self	LB
Use questions to hook the reader in the introduction	✔
Use sentences and paragraphs	✔
Use facts to inform the reader
Use different sentence starters	✔
Use VCOP	✔

Start writing here…

Introduction

Hi i am going to tell you all about Saturn.Did you know Saturn is the second largest planet in our Solar System.

Appearance

Saturn has rings they are made out of dust ice and pieces of rocks.It is a gas giant just like Jupiter.Saturn rings aren't very thick.And the rings look glimmering.Even Saturn is still huge.

Size

Although  Saturn is the second largest planet in our Solar System and Saturn is

20,000.Saturn KM and Saturn is not heavy at all.Also only Jupiter is more bigger than the other planets except the sun.

Rings

Also Saturn’s rings are made of pieces of rocks and dust,ice and it is famous for it rings.

My name in New Zealand Sign language

This week we have been learning some sign language in Flox class.This is a link to my in NZSL.

Can you sign your name.

Interesting facts

Hi i am sami and this is a audio recording
 https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B-mzrdEjK4zGZUxiMkRXT0daTTg&authuser=0 I really like to record my voice because it is more faster than typing.

ANZAC letter